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Satan's Book -second edit
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05-17-2014, 03:33 AM
Hi UnclePedro, thanks for reading and commenting. I agree well is a poor start, optional starting words I've thought of are equally unappealing, such as Oh! My, Christ... I'll think on it longer. And thanks for the ideas re bracketed lines - I'll edit that in Thanks muchly, Marianne
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Satan's Book -second edit - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 11:20 AM
RE: Satan's Book - by billy - 05-10-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: Satan's Book - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 12:41 PM
RE: Satan's Book - by Brownlie - 05-10-2014, 12:56 PM
RE: Satan's Book - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 01:20 PM
RE: Satan's Book -edited - by UnclePedro - 05-16-2014, 06:28 PM
RE: Satan's Book -edited - by Mopkins - 05-17-2014, 03:33 AM
RE: Satan's Book -edited - by Mopkins - 05-22-2014, 12:30 PM
RE: Satan's Book -second edit - by Mopkins - 05-24-2014, 04:44 AM
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