Pie
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Dark clouds tumble over into
puffy white meringue pie.
Using a lightning fork
I take a bite while thunder rumbles below.
There’ll be a loosening in the tornado belt
as weather swells.


–Erthona

Note: I incorporated ideas of Chris, ed, and Marcella. Thanks for the input.

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Pie - by Erthona - 05-16-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Pie - by ChristopherSea - 05-16-2014, 07:37 PM
RE: Pie - by abu nuwas - 05-16-2014, 08:18 PM
RE: Pie - by ellajam - 05-16-2014, 08:51 PM



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