05-15-2014, 07:53 AM
(05-14-2014, 08:48 AM)ellajam Wrote: Great choice, this was good to start with and Loretta worked through the critiques so well it remained the same, just better.
Well done, Loretta.
(05-15-2014, 07:53 AM)LorettaYoung Wrote:(05-14-2014, 08:48 AM)ellajam Wrote: Great choice, this was good to start with and Loretta worked through the critiques so well it remained the same, just better.
Well done, Loretta.
Wow guys; this was a total surprise and great honor; as much to your dedication as anything I did. Couldn't have made the poem right without you: Leanne, ellajam, abu, dale, billy, todd, tectak who stuck with me all the way; you have made my day. Let me say, personally, I came to this writing with no education in this area,
I experience an ah ha moment with two words "truth bare"; and I combined my fascination with those words with my love of music. Didn't know a thing about meter feet etc., just wanted to write my inspirations as rhythm that flowed. The poems I've written till now have little structure and I hope you will be patient and as understanding with my wilder poems. Love the jokes about the colon? My love and best to you all. Loretta