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Am I a Fool
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05-15-2014, 12:25 AM
milo, it looks like you are missing some punctuation after play in stanza 2. I was wondering if you were up for some variation in your repeat: 'a fool', 'the fool' and 'her fool' could be some possibilities.
Thanks for breaking the ice on NaPM posts for work-shopping.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 10:37 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by billy - 05-14-2014, 10:51 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Todd - 05-14-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Brownlie - 05-14-2014, 11:23 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by ellajam - 05-14-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by ChristopherSea - 05-15-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-15-2014, 07:04 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Erthona - 05-15-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-16-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Brownlie - 05-15-2014, 03:00 PM
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