Am I a Fool
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This one was from the very first day of NaPM. It may not be ready for work shopping but I figured if I started others would feel more comfortable doing it. Feel free to offer any suggestions at all, everything is up for grabs here.

Am I a Fool

Am I a fool to see a ghost
in every girl that walks the coast,
as lavender will ghost to grey
and one will turn to none and say,
"am I a fool."

This morning will be spent like most -
the endless days of tea and toast
and living is the ghost of play
am I a fool?

One will stew or two will roast -
the spirit’s gone without the host
as night will always conquer day
as ghosts of voices fade away
you call me still so I just may.
Am I a fool?
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Messages In This Thread
Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 10:37 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by billy - 05-14-2014, 10:51 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:56 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Todd - 05-14-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Brownlie - 05-14-2014, 11:23 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by ellajam - 05-14-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by ChristopherSea - 05-15-2014, 12:25 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-15-2014, 07:04 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Erthona - 05-15-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: Am I a Fool - by milo - 05-16-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: Am I a Fool - by Brownlie - 05-15-2014, 03:00 PM



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