A Prayer -three versions
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hi Abu, did you mean the revised version or the first one? I know the first one has mostly starting iambs, but I thought the revision started each line with a trochee - though as I'm still learning about meter I could be wrong. I think I still prefer the first version.
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A Prayer -three versions - by Mopkins - 05-13-2014, 03:54 PM
RE: A Prayer - by Brownlie - 05-13-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: A Prayer - by Mopkins - 05-13-2014, 05:35 PM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by abu nuwas - 05-14-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by Mopkins - 05-14-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by billy - 05-14-2014, 10:06 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by milo - 05-14-2014, 10:12 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by Mopkins - 05-14-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: A Prayer -three versions - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: A Prayer -three versions - by Mopkins - 05-17-2014, 03:44 AM



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