Breath of Life

Breath of Life

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05-14-2014, 08:44 AM

I love the meter and rhythm of the poem. I am not sure about verse 4; how it relates, lonely cries seem the opposite of screams, the last line "she sighs, please sweet breeze" but I am in question about the relate to "blow until it dries". Nice reading. Loretta

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Breath of Life - by Thoughtjotter - 05-14-2014, 07:56 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by LorettaYoung - 05-14-2014, 08:44 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by Thoughtjotter - 05-15-2014, 01:21 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by Jinxy - 05-14-2014, 12:41 PM

RE: Breath of Life - by Mopkins - 05-14-2014, 12:51 PM

RE: Breath of Life - by UnclePedro - 05-16-2014, 06:37 PM

RE: Breath of Life - by Thoughtjotter - 05-17-2014, 12:52 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by Thoughtjotter - 05-22-2014, 07:02 PM

RE: Breath of Life - by ellajam - 05-16-2014, 09:49 PM

RE: Breath of Life - by heslopian - 05-17-2014, 09:44 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by Brownlie - 05-18-2014, 06:08 AM

RE: Breath of Life - by Thoughtjotter - 05-19-2014, 12:05 AM

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