Pipe Dream

[Babeanew]

Hi,

I like the iron centipedes, other than that it's hard to understand where you are getting at, I mean for me, and I'm a big noob...
Didn't even know what meek means.

Looking it up I really liked the idea, but don't get what is happening afterwards, "the trunk of a horn blare".

Maybe you could just stop at "hollowed in the trunk" and then go on to a new idea.

I whish you could give more info on those degenerate skycrappers.

Hope that helps.

Regards

A.