05-13-2014, 10:06 PM
"I agree with Marianne, it could go genderless if it hadn't been mutter's day, my Dad could fix anything."
I've had it both ways.
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"the last two lines struck me as hokey."
The whole poem is hokey!
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"I like it, but I'd like to see something other than "Would it help to know"
what would you like to see?
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Actually, I like it better with Daddy, but I wrote it on mother's day, so.... It's not a great poem, but it's not really suppose to be.
Thanks for your reading and comments, always appreciated,
xoxoxo
Dale
I've had it both ways.
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"the last two lines struck me as hokey."
The whole poem is hokey!
__________________________________________________________________________________________
"I like it, but I'd like to see something other than "Would it help to know"
what would you like to see?
_______________________________________________________________
Actually, I like it better with Daddy, but I wrote it on mother's day, so.... It's not a great poem, but it's not really suppose to be.
Thanks for your reading and comments, always appreciated,
xoxoxo
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.