She broke her baby’s head off (4 mutter's day)

[ellajam]

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She broke her baby’s head off,
I had to put it back on,
does that make me a god?

Would it help to know
she is two years old,
and the baby only plastic.

But, am I any less a god
to her.
Or am I just,
Mommy?


©2002 ~Erthona

I like it, but I'd like to see something other than "Would it help to know", and the last two lines struck me as hokey.

And I agree with Marianne, it could go genderless if it hadn't been mutter's day, my Dad could fix anything.