A Prayer -three versions
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(05-13-2014, 03:54 PM)Mopkins Wrote:  A Prayer

If I am to have an angel
to watch me on my walk
then let one follow me around
but do not let him talk –
that’s way too schizophrenic!
I confess I’d like to know
somebody obsessive
concerned with me alone,
to know my fleeting thoughts
and musings thoroughly,
to hang on all I do and say
and love me eternally.
Yes, send me someone silent
but devoted, that’ll do,
and when I sense his presence
he’ll remind me then of You.
You could try and make it into a chant by starting all the lines with a trochee
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A Prayer -three versions - by Mopkins - 05-13-2014, 03:54 PM
RE: A Prayer - by Brownlie - 05-13-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: A Prayer - by Mopkins - 05-13-2014, 05:35 PM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by abu nuwas - 05-14-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by Mopkins - 05-14-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by billy - 05-14-2014, 10:06 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by milo - 05-14-2014, 10:12 AM
RE: A Prayer -edited - by Mopkins - 05-14-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: A Prayer -three versions - by milo - 05-14-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: A Prayer -three versions - by Mopkins - 05-17-2014, 03:44 AM



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