05-13-2014, 08:49 AM
Hi SuicidalBlueJay,
That part bothers me too as well.
In terms of the imagery, I'm not sure what I can say about that. I'm not aiming to be obscure, but nor do I think it needs to be made clearer. I will definitely persevere next time to think about how accessible the imagery is.
The title could definitely use some work though. I meant pipe dream as in someone who is smoking a pipe to give the feel of that kind of ' hazy everything is connected vibe', but I could definitely change it to something clearer so people don't think first about oil or drilling.
P.s I'm glad Eugene_Moon that you got the piece.
B.
That part bothers me too as well.
In terms of the imagery, I'm not sure what I can say about that. I'm not aiming to be obscure, but nor do I think it needs to be made clearer. I will definitely persevere next time to think about how accessible the imagery is.
The title could definitely use some work though. I meant pipe dream as in someone who is smoking a pipe to give the feel of that kind of ' hazy everything is connected vibe', but I could definitely change it to something clearer so people don't think first about oil or drilling.
P.s I'm glad Eugene_Moon that you got the piece.
B.