All Alone

[tectak]

You have begun with a well intentioned attempt at poetry. Now if you truly wish to express your feelings with POETRY rather than jotting down thoughts (and This is exactly what I have done for so long) this is the place to learn but you must be willing to trust the people here who are willing to take the time to read and critic what you submit. If you are a beginning writer you may have an advantage of; not having too many bad habits to overcome first.
This may be more advise than critic, It all depends on how bad you want to learn.

The Professor of Written Wreckage,
R T

amen two; that?