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Pipe Dream
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05-12-2014, 11:09 PM
(05-08-2014, 09:54 PM)benno_422 Wrote: Pipe Dream:I think this poem is good. Sounds all deep and stuff. But right here I feel like it's an awkward transition sort of? I'm a novice poet so don't take my critique to heart. But yeah, I guess I just can't understand the imagery 
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Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-08-2014, 09:54 PM
RE: Pipe Dream - by kindofahippy - 05-09-2014, 12:14 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-10-2014, 07:28 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 08:11 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-10-2014, 10:30 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Eugene_Moon - 05-11-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Martyl - 05-11-2014, 03:43 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by bbcashdollar - 05-11-2014, 09:57 PM
RE: Pipe Dream - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:09 PM
RE: Pipe Dream - by benno_422 - 05-13-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 07:50 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by olive_morphia - 05-29-2014, 11:45 PM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Isis - 06-02-2014, 02:25 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by bena - 06-02-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Pipe Dream - by hydroguy - 06-03-2014, 02:38 PM
RE: Pipe Dream - by Sachelcharges - 06-03-2014, 05:13 PM
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