Drive

[ChristopherSea]

There is a good image here in the lit match, but the subject matter remains abstract in those 'hopes' and 'tears'. The hit and miss line breaks, odd punctuation and random capitalization is distracting. Specifically, there is no period after 'match', yet 'Racing' is capped. There are line breaks where commas should be, which could be fine, except the first 'horizon' has both a comma and a break. There are other breaks on weak words such as: 'with', 'the', 'a'. Lines breaks after articles are not a good choice. I recommend reviewing all of the above. Good luck with your next edit./Chris