Two Eggs
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(09-14-2013, 01:21 AM)shenaz Wrote:  Two eggs in the pot
Two nice round eggs
The water is hot and the heat is on
We splutter and curdle
Two round eggs
In the heat of the moment
This is one of the few poems that I like, that doesn't have a set rhythmic pattern! And I love the simplicity of it. Well done shenaz Smile
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Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 01:21 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 03:29 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 03:31 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 04:01 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 04:05 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Snowbells - 09-14-2013, 09:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 09-14-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by nhanna1223 - 02-03-2014, 02:11 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-03-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by LickinLyrics - 02-03-2014, 07:16 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by tomoffing - 02-03-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by DominoMan - 02-03-2014, 02:41 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-07-2014, 07:26 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by kingmicahde - 02-08-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-08-2014, 03:58 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by Sheep - 02-11-2014, 06:29 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 02-12-2014, 03:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by cfgorman - 03-01-2014, 01:27 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 03-02-2014, 05:46 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Izo - 03-15-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by WordJunky - 03-16-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by Babeanew - 04-04-2014, 09:17 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 02:10 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by California - 04-07-2014, 07:40 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:23 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Robert9614 - 04-22-2014, 08:35 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Willpark - 04-29-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by RiverNotch - 04-29-2014, 06:17 PM
RE: Two Eggs - by constellation - 04-30-2014, 07:36 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by shenaz - 05-01-2014, 09:27 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by bbcashdollar - 05-12-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:22 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by newsclippings - 05-12-2014, 11:38 AM
RE: Two Eggs - by Igor - 02-28-2016, 11:06 AM



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