05-12-2014, 11:20 AM
(05-11-2014, 11:39 PM)LorettaYoung Wrote: I Cede You PeaceUmmm Hello! This is more on my end... but I didn't understand your poem very well. I'm new to poetry so that's probably my fault. And also I don't know what "cede" means lol. Anyways I like peace and passion so this poem is fine with me!
I cede you peace,
I'll keep my passion.
Let's have a feast,
we'll dress in fashion;
you're peace
(and reason too)
and me, am passion
through and through.
Yet, I know your heart
a golden gem,
and I will laugh,
raise up my head
(as once you said)
to make of empty peace
a new facade.
I will,
disturb the peace
in my own fashion.
I cede you peace
in search of passion
