I Cede You Peace
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(05-11-2014, 11:39 PM)LorettaYoung Wrote:  I Cede You Peace

I cede you peace,
I'll keep my passion.
Let's have a feast,
we'll dress in fashion;
you're peace
(and reason too)
and me, am passion
through and through.

Yet, I know your heart
a golden gem,
and I will laugh,
raise up my head
(as once you said)
to make of empty peace
a new facade.

I will,
disturb the peace
in my own fashion.
I cede you peace
in search of passion
Ummm Hello! This is more on my end... but I didn't understand your poem very well. I'm new to poetry so that's probably my fault. And also I don't know what "cede" means lol. Anyways I like peace and passion so this poem is fine with me! Big Grin
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I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-11-2014, 11:39 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-12-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by Erthona - 05-12-2014, 05:25 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by nb - 05-12-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by abu nuwas - 05-12-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:20 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by billy - 05-12-2014, 05:42 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by ellajam - 05-12-2014, 09:04 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-12-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by abu nuwas - 05-13-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 03:08 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-13-2014, 03:19 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-14-2014, 07:53 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-23-2014, 06:56 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by tectak - 05-24-2014, 12:18 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by Tiger the Lion - 06-02-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by metalfan91 - 06-03-2014, 02:14 AM
RE: I Cede You Peace - by LorettaYoung - 06-03-2014, 06:42 AM



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