05-12-2014, 05:25 AM
Loretta,
Two quick observations:
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"will keep the "you're peace and reason too.....for now until I get more response"
"too", seems like a forced rhyme for "through and through", or vice versa.
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"A golden gem", there are many gems which are gold;
Seems redundantly contradictorily to me, kind of like saying you are a cat-dog. They are both animals, but they are different animals.
"there are many gems which are gold"
No, that is not true even metaphorically. People are sometimes called "gems", but never called "gold". When referring to people we use "golden", e.g., "the golden boy", but more usually, "he had a golden arm". You might also say "his word is gold". So you might say (although I wouldn't as it belabors the point, not to mention being redundant) "golden gem".
Dale
Paul is dead
Two quick observations:
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"will keep the "you're peace and reason too.....for now until I get more response"
"too", seems like a forced rhyme for "through and through", or vice versa.
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"A golden gem", there are many gems which are gold;
Seems redundantly contradictorily to me, kind of like saying you are a cat-dog. They are both animals, but they are different animals.
"there are many gems which are gold"
No, that is not true even metaphorically. People are sometimes called "gems", but never called "gold". When referring to people we use "golden", e.g., "the golden boy", but more usually, "he had a golden arm". You might also say "his word is gold". So you might say (although I wouldn't as it belabors the point, not to mention being redundant) "golden gem".
Dale
Paul is dead
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.