Jazz

Jazz

Eugene_Moon
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05-11-2014, 03:00 AM

I do agree with Brownlie, your fragments man. If you just edit your lines a little bit, make sure you end with a complete thought, then it's just about perfect. Your rhyme and flow is very balanced, and word choice superior! Great work, you're very talented!

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Jazz - by expiring_touch - 04-30-2014, 09:25 AM

RE: Jazz - by paxsan - 05-01-2014, 11:59 PM

RE: Jazz - by Brownlie - 05-02-2014, 03:11 AM

RE: Jazz - by bbcashdollar - 05-05-2014, 10:47 AM

RE: Jazz - by ChristopherSea - 05-06-2014, 04:40 AM

RE: Jazz - by Eugene_Moon - 05-11-2014, 03:00 AM

RE: Jazz - by tectak - 07-20-2014, 04:29 PM

RE: Jazz - by SuicidalBlueJay - 05-12-2014, 11:13 PM

RE: Jazz - by Thoughtjotter - 05-13-2014, 06:11 AM

RE: Jazz - by crow - 05-13-2014, 06:14 PM

RE: Jazz - by Alexearth - 07-04-2014, 04:24 AM

RE: Jazz - by zmeansy - 07-04-2014, 05:19 PM

RE: Jazz - by Agamemnon - 07-05-2014, 06:34 PM

RE: Jazz - by KatBrown - 07-19-2014, 09:06 PM

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