In the Woodwork
#6
i'm kind of thinking the title gives it away. the wood has a purpose. in the case of a table it's for sitting at and putting things on, it can really only be beautiful if it succeeds in those two things, without them it can never be a table, same with the bookshelf if you don't make it deep enough it will always only be a ledge or small shelf..

i see the thing as two statements that read as a poem but lack much purpose. i'd like to see a third stanza to show some reason.
i think it has a lot of potential to be more than clever.

(05-10-2014, 03:00 PM)kindofahippy Wrote:  A table can be a work of art,
but first it needs the proper balance
or else nothing will stay in place.

A shelf can hold expansive knowledge,
but when it's too narrow for its purpose
the books will bring it crashing down.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
In the Woodwork - by kindofahippy - 05-10-2014, 03:00 PM
RE: In the Woodwork - by Erthona - 05-10-2014, 03:16 PM
RE: In the Woodwork - by Brownlie - 05-10-2014, 04:12 PM
RE: In the Woodwork - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 04:33 PM
RE: In the Woodwork - by zmeansy - 05-10-2014, 04:45 PM
RE: In the Woodwork - by billy - 05-10-2014, 04:51 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!