Satan's Book -second edit

[Mopkins]

Hi Brownlie, thanks for looking at it. Details I've heards as DEtails and deTAILS but i say DEtails, which is why I've scanned it that way. I think Americans might say deTAILS. After reading it out again, i also find myself stressing 'for' so I'll change my scan of that line. I did take into account accuses three syllables, they're spread between two anapests (i think) Thanks for your speedy response, Marianne