Dissaray
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(05-09-2014, 11:13 PM)ellajam Wrote:  Ha, this was fun. That's forumitis, gives you an invisible rash you think others see, common as getting a cold. Smile

Thanks for the read, and the flock. Wink
Well this is good news, I thought my keyboard had run out of ink or something! I've done wrote Whippoorwill so many times I can even spell it now and I've been scratching every time somebody looks at me.
Do I need to take some writequill or somethin for it?
Thanks,
R T

(05-09-2014, 11:55 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  Your 'dissary' is in disarray,
and yes, I read about poor will.

Your thoughts jotted down remain today.
Were your critiques tossed as swill?

Has the whip-poor-will flown away;
are the three versions flapping still?
Man, I've abused that poor bird so much PETA is on my ass. Might be time to let ole Whippoorwill fly North.
If the bird fits, scream!,
R T

(05-10-2014, 05:03 AM)Leanne Wrote:  What else are fuck ups for
if not to fuck up more?

I love meta- and self-referential poetry (perhaps a little bit too much), because this is where we get a direct window into the poet's messed up though processes -- and this to me proves just how welcome an addition you are Smile
Well, I guess my intellectual approach kinda went to the birds, huh? Thanks for the vote of confidence though, can't wait till I become a real 'Bird of a Feather'!
Undissarayed,
R T
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Messages In This Thread
Dissaray - by Thoughtjotter - 05-09-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: Dissaray - by ellajam - 05-09-2014, 11:13 PM
RE: Dissaray - by Thoughtjotter - 05-10-2014, 01:10 PM
RE: Dissaray - by ChristopherSea - 05-09-2014, 11:55 PM
RE: Dissaray - by Leanne - 05-10-2014, 05:03 AM
RE: Dissaray - by kindofahippy - 05-10-2014, 03:11 PM
RE: Dissaray - by Thoughtjotter - 05-14-2014, 07:06 AM
RE: Dissaray - by heslopian - 05-12-2014, 06:47 AM
RE: Dissaray - by Erthona - 05-12-2014, 01:09 PM



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