The Blackwood River -edited

The Blackwood River -edited

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#11

05-10-2014, 10:07 AM

I've posted an edit with a few new stanzas, anyone care to agree with me that I've now ruined it? I think by adding to it, I've lost the focus on the wishful personification of the river. Floundering... any comments appreciated.

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The Blackwood River -edited - by Mopkins - 05-02-2014, 03:19 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by ChristopherSea - 05-02-2014, 07:47 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Mopkins - 05-02-2014, 08:23 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by SilverMire - 05-02-2014, 08:45 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Mopkins - 05-03-2014, 04:16 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by 71degrees - 05-03-2014, 11:51 PM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Brownlie - 05-04-2014, 12:45 AM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Mopkins - 05-04-2014, 10:55 AM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Caleb Murdock - 05-07-2014, 08:59 AM

RE: The Blackwood River - by Mopkins - 05-07-2014, 11:30 AM

RE: The Blackwood River -edited - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 10:07 AM

RE: The Blackwood River -edited - by Caleb Murdock - 05-10-2014, 05:20 PM

RE: The Blackwood River -edited - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 07:26 PM

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