05-10-2014, 07:28 AM
Hey kindofahippy,
Thanks for taking the time to give me some feedback! Overall did you enjoy reading it?
If you saw any drawbacks in the poem, I'm eager to here them so I can workship it.
I wrote the poem about how science and technology often imitates the natural world. But then also if the ecosystem becomes science and technology the idea of nature imitating science and the feeling of the city in response so that nature can grow and adapt.
B.
Thanks for taking the time to give me some feedback! Overall did you enjoy reading it?
If you saw any drawbacks in the poem, I'm eager to here them so I can workship it.
I wrote the poem about how science and technology often imitates the natural world. But then also if the ecosystem becomes science and technology the idea of nature imitating science and the feeling of the city in response so that nature can grow and adapt.
B.