(05-10-2014, 06:07 AM)Brownlie Wrote: [quote='Leanne' pid='83489' dateline='1320788340']I should hope it does :p
Thy blessed tongue, it trippeth o’er the phrase --- This heavy use of Early Modern English makes the poem seem ironic
Sorry but if you think the construction is very good, I think I might have failed.
It could be worse
