05-10-2014, 05:17 AM
Poetry needs to be easy on the ear.
This poem is very rough on the ear.
Introduce some rhyme.
The poem talks about locking up your heart.
This is a powerful sentiment.
The poem talks about a powerful sentiment without being powerful enough.
I think a bit of editing will help this poem enormously
This poem is very rough on the ear.
Introduce some rhyme.
The poem talks about locking up your heart.
This is a powerful sentiment.
The poem talks about a powerful sentiment without being powerful enough.
I think a bit of editing will help this poem enormously