05-09-2014, 03:21 AM
Rowens- Reworded the lines that don't fit the poem. I think the changes definitely made the poem stronger
Billy- Changed up the line to something a little bit more interesting. and i too think the lower crust in this poem is the broker.
Thanks for the feedback and the reads fellas!
Billy- Changed up the line to something a little bit more interesting. and i too think the lower crust in this poem is the broker.
Thanks for the feedback and the reads fellas!
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx