inversions in poetry

[Erthona]

Well, as I said I was in a bit of a rush, and I was mainly thinking of milo at the time, which is why I used the example I did. I meant in strict IP and in the middle of the line a poet would most likely notice and a non-poet wouldn't but if not handled well would create an unconscious disruption. The point being, despite it not being a great example, is a poet notices on a conscious level what a non-poet will only register at a non-conscious level, but it will still be disruptive to the reading. That is the important part, "it will still be disruptive to the reading". However, in the future Caleb, if you wish to make a point leave me out of it, create your own points instead of riding on my coattails. I dislike knowing that I have to be so careful in anything that I write that it will be completely above reproach. It makes me feel like I am studying philosophy again.

Dale