05-07-2014, 05:08 PM
I'm following ChristopherSea's lead here, a bit, by posting my intended meaning.
This is meant to be a fun little murder mystery, but it's just turned out to be mysterious. The clues are the title and the jarring switch into talking about "her." It's based on 2 Samuel 11, the story of David and Bathsheba--I'm hoping someone can help me make the clues more overt . . .
This is meant to be a fun little murder mystery, but it's just turned out to be mysterious. The clues are the title and the jarring switch into talking about "her." It's based on 2 Samuel 11, the story of David and Bathsheba--I'm hoping someone can help me make the clues more overt . . .