05-07-2014, 09:38 AM
Thank you all for your comments.
As I was writing the poem, I was thinking of the naked thing as that raw feeling of love and support that exists between friends. I was thinking that it is weak if left alone, but can be the most powerful force if you put effort into the relationship. Any suggestions for how to hone in on this through the writing? Thanks again.
As I was writing the poem, I was thinking of the naked thing as that raw feeling of love and support that exists between friends. I was thinking that it is weak if left alone, but can be the most powerful force if you put effort into the relationship. Any suggestions for how to hone in on this through the writing? Thanks again.

