05-07-2014, 07:58 AM
rowens,
This is definitely your style, but I see evidence of dramatic change as well. It's weird. You sound alive here.
These lines are quite potent:
I sneeze lysergide colored mucous,
staring into the sun is a laxative,
This is definitely your style, but I see evidence of dramatic change as well. It's weird. You sound alive here.
These lines are quite potent:
I sneeze lysergide colored mucous,
staring into the sun is a laxative,
I'll be there in a minute.

