The Wild Wind

[ellajam]

Elajam: thank you so much for all of your time and thoughts. I must have more time than now to study this; and the site on form. I will say though that can be a positive and negative result from riding the wild wind; and groan was one place I saw it. I am intent on having a verse relating to romance; when I think imaginatively, the wind mellows as it crosses the sill, it's not meant to be a bother but to bring the new, the wild. Why is it wrong to have inverted sentence; i see them all the time in poetry, and there is something i seem to like about it; do you think it sounds bad or is just bad poetry form? I will study more; consider everything said; am in deep gratitude for all this input. Loretta

The critique is hippy's, I just posted the link for you, I haven't commented on the poem yet.

I'm sure there are threads on inversion around here, but if you want to discuss it you could bump or start a thread in the discussion forum.