awake all night

[ChristopherSea]

Dale, This is a short form for you. You are aging poorly my friend when you lose your eye for pretty women. I think you could tie in the following lines better and smooth the transition:

I’d rather be upon a ship,
watching waves at sea.
All day long I want to sleep

You know, watching the waves until they lull you to sleep or something of that nature. See what you think.

It' a rather sad poem, therefore well done./Chris