Am I an asshole?

[billy]

if i may....asshole
and yes news, i too am in the asshole class. thankfully we have a percentage of semi-decent to decent poets as well. it can sometimes be hard not to be cruel.

Leanne, that was... I cannot give any criticism, honestly. Wonderful. Tears to my eyes. I could RELATE.

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the eyes bleed without seeing more like.
at least you didn't ask for feedback on it

loved it

Just for you Sandra, I made a pome from some first lines of the Newly Registered forum. I may be evil, but I cut and paste with the best of 'em:


This poem is just for you
We are told to be
The slow descent into insanity.
The maggots raised inside the flesh
It's terrible. The Itch.
I'm worrying
What if my skull was full of hot air
Cold were those nights of fall
If I gave my heart a paintbrush
Why build you here
The Eyes see without seeing
Confusing melancholy

The trees are on fire again
It's another evening, turning into night,

We were lovers
Engaging in the excrement of dark shadows
Trapped in my own stream of consciousness,
I see it all around me
Come by my side friend
Don't blame God
The devil’s pulse is the heartbeat of happiness
Kickboxing again

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i'll have some of them. people generally stay away from me due to the leprosy

hugs all round