The Blackwood River -edited

[Mopkins]

Hi 71degrees, thanks for reading and commenting. Haven't read that story, tho I did read some Hemingway at high school, I'll look for it, thanks for the suggestion. bath is just another descriptor for the river, it's not meant to imply that anyone is currently bathing in it... have to try to make that clearer I guess. Glad you liked it.

Hi Brownlie, thanks for commenting. Still new to learning meter, so I'm not surprised it's a bit off metrically. pleased you liked it.

Marianne