A Trip In Your Library

[RiverNotch]

I read it four times, and couldn't figure out the meanings/double entendres.....and you'll just have to trust me, I'm not that daft (only on occasion.)

It is rather too thick, I suppose. I'll try (I've tried, since I crafted this reply after making the edit) to make some of the meanings clearer.

This may seem a bit harsh, but every rhyme, to me, was predictable. Skin/begin Oh/Know. round/found novel/grovel ----I could go on but I don't ike to seem cruel.

This comment kinda puzzles me though. I usually find rhymes to be predictable when I already understand the poem in [something], not when I don't. I wonder why it's somewhat different in your case.

And how a poem looks on a page is tantamount to how seriously it will be taken. Poems are works of art, and I would hate to see a Van Gough centred.

Good point.

Now to leave you with some nice thoughts: there are several thoughts/lines that are brilliant in this. =)

Again, thanks for the comment. I've edited the poem, made some rather big changes to the whole structure and such. Hopefully, it conveys its meanings and whatnot better.