Old Love (edit #1)

[Caleb Murdock]

This is certainly a different take on old age than my take.

I notice that the first stanza doesn't have a verb. Perhaps it is just a preference of mine, but I can relate much better to poems that have good "sentencing", as Frost called it.

Good point, i got caught in the "ing"s. I think like that and this was a quickie.

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This is certainly a different take on old age than my take.

I notice that the first stanza doesn't have a verb. Perhaps it is just a preference of mine, but I can relate much better to poems that have good "sentencing", as Frost called it.

The verb is "comes".

Good point, this was a quickie.

Oh yes, you're right -- there is a verb in there. I took that to be just one more of the series of phrases. My apologies!