05-02-2014, 08:37 PM
Well, I'll think about it, but I love the metaphorical theme of that Gothic classic. Moreover, it was the title and punchline that inspired everything in between. I think if I abandoned those, I would just trash the whole poem. The feme fatale is a favorite theme of mine and I can't get the idea of a Frankenstein/Monster flavored one out of my head. I can also do another. Much obliged for your input.
--then nevermind what I said
the author's preference, well-tested, wins every time
--then nevermind what I said
the author's preference, well-tested, wins every time