05-02-2014, 03:28 PM
Neat poem, I like the portrayal of the dance between the two, and the dejected detective at the end, his dancing around after you fruitless... nice touch. Marianne
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Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Magpie - 05-02-2014, 09:57 AM
RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Mopkins - 05-02-2014, 03:28 PM
RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by cidermaid - 05-02-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by John Galt - 05-02-2014, 04:11 PM
RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by billy - 05-02-2014, 04:32 PM
RE: Dancing Round The Supermarket - by Keith - 05-03-2014, 06:46 AM
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