05-02-2014, 01:31 PM
Thanks for reading, 
71, I know, it's a simple little thing. I'm glad the sounds came across.
t, yes, those are the lines I mean. I don't like "laugh lines", or the sound of "wrinkles". If I can think of something better I'll replace it. Can there be dull nuggets? Maybe not, I'll think on it.
I'm glad it got a grin, that's what it was for.
71, I know, it's a simple little thing. I'm glad the sounds came across.
t, yes, those are the lines I mean. I don't like "laugh lines", or the sound of "wrinkles". If I can think of something better I'll replace it. Can there be dull nuggets? Maybe not, I'll think on it.
I'm glad it got a grin, that's what it was for.
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