Old Love (edit #1)
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(05-02-2014, 02:45 AM)Erthona Wrote:  ella,

I've no problems except maybe the break between L2 and L3 in S1, seems awkward.

All I can say to the rest is, isn't it true.


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Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: Old Love - by 71degrees - 05-02-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Old Love - by tomoffing - 05-02-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 01:31 PM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 03:03 PM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 06:29 PM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-03-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 08:36 AM
RE: Old Love - by milo - 05-03-2014, 09:12 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-03-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-29-2014, 09:22 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ChristopherSea - 05-30-2014, 02:29 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by Brownlie - 05-30-2014, 07:29 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by billy - 05-30-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:17 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 12:12 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by 71degrees - 05-30-2014, 10:46 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 12:22 AM



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