Old Love (edit #1)
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ella,

I've no problems except maybe the break between L2 and L3 in S1, seems awkward.

All I can say to the rest is, isn't it true.


Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 02:52 AM
RE: Old Love - by 71degrees - 05-02-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Old Love - by tomoffing - 05-02-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 01:31 PM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-02-2014, 03:03 PM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-02-2014, 06:29 PM
RE: Old Love - by Erthona - 05-03-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 08:36 AM
RE: Old Love - by milo - 05-03-2014, 09:12 AM
RE: Old Love - by ellajam - 05-03-2014, 01:37 PM
RE: Old Love - by Caleb Murdock - 05-03-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-29-2014, 09:22 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ChristopherSea - 05-30-2014, 02:29 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by Brownlie - 05-30-2014, 07:29 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by billy - 05-30-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:17 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 12:12 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by 71degrees - 05-30-2014, 10:46 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by ellajam - 05-30-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: Old Love (edit #1) - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 12:22 AM



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