05-02-2014, 02:38 AM
71D
Outside of some odd line breaks, such as breaking "crowded | sidewalks", I didn't have many problems with this. I could feel the end coming halfway through, but then again I'm a cynic. I might consider doing away with "at once" in S3 L1. Maybe if anything use "instantly". Maybe a period after "halves". Sort of an odd word to end on, but not really a problem for me.
Best,
Dale
Outside of some odd line breaks, such as breaking "crowded | sidewalks", I didn't have many problems with this. I could feel the end coming halfway through, but then again I'm a cynic. I might consider doing away with "at once" in S3 L1. Maybe if anything use "instantly". Maybe a period after "halves". Sort of an odd word to end on, but not really a problem for me.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.