05-01-2014, 11:31 PM
I read it four times, and couldn't figure out the meanings/double entendres.....and you'll just have to trust me, I'm not that daft (only on occasion.)
This may seem a bit harsh, but every rhyme, to me, was predictable. Skin/begin Oh/Know. round/found novel/grovel ----I could go on but I don't ike to seem cruel.
And how a poem looks on a page is tantamount to how seriously it will be taken. Poems are works of art, and I would hate to see a Van Gough centred.
Now to leave you with some nice thoughts: there are several thoughts/lines that are brilliant in this. =)
This may seem a bit harsh, but every rhyme, to me, was predictable. Skin/begin Oh/Know. round/found novel/grovel ----I could go on but I don't ike to seem cruel.
And how a poem looks on a page is tantamount to how seriously it will be taken. Poems are works of art, and I would hate to see a Van Gough centred.
Now to leave you with some nice thoughts: there are several thoughts/lines that are brilliant in this. =)