Life on a flower

[Thoughtjotter]

If we lived on a flower,
we'd all need a shower,
'cuz we'd all be covered
in bright yellow powder

It is a sweet short poem, be proud of it.
Try it with out abbreviations.
This reminds me of a poem that I wrote many years ago:
"If I had a nickle,
I would buy a pickle.
the pickle I would eat.
then,
I would not have my pickle
or a nickle for a treat"
Sorry about that, see how your poetry can be contagious!
Keep up the good work,
R T