My Name is Orange Juice
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That tightens the poem. I had ideas when I was trying to write it, certain ideas like using the tiny paper cups, THE as if to assume that everybody knew what I was talking about and was intimate with those little cups. Making up memories as if they were things everyone remembered.

Tightens or tidies.
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My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 04-30-2014, 02:21 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by leesharks - 04-30-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 04-30-2014, 02:34 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by leesharks - 04-30-2014, 02:44 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by ChristopherSea - 04-30-2014, 02:50 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 04-30-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by leesharks - 04-30-2014, 03:04 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 04-30-2014, 03:11 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by poe - 05-07-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Erthona - 05-07-2014, 05:32 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by poe - 05-07-2014, 07:52 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by newsclippings - 05-07-2014, 07:58 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Erthona - 05-07-2014, 08:03 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by billy - 05-07-2014, 06:04 PM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 05-08-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 08:03 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 05-08-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 08:12 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 05-08-2014, 08:15 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Erthona - 05-08-2014, 09:13 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by rowens - 05-08-2014, 10:06 AM
RE: My Name is Orange Juice - by Thoughtjotter - 05-08-2014, 06:14 PM



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