Two Eggs

[Willpark]

This poem is short and but not quite to the point, which is good. I detect hints of sexual connotation, and upon reading some of the other posts, I see this was your intention. Be sure to make this a bit more explicit.
Likewise, "the water is hot and the heat is on" I can tell aren't two phrases that mean the same thing, but they are very similar, so try to make them more different. Interesting poem.