04-29-2014, 12:28 PM
Tectak--
Your defensive remarks are well-earned, and you're right. So:
"The piece is tongue in cheek...my avatar."
I knew that'd wrench my edit, but I wanted to edit yours as a straight-piece, thinking that'd be most-helpful.
As to the semi's, I don't have a dog in the fight, except they stylize the poem. If you like them, keep them!
Best of luck,
crow.
Your defensive remarks are well-earned, and you're right. So:
"The piece is tongue in cheek...my avatar."
I knew that'd wrench my edit, but I wanted to edit yours as a straight-piece, thinking that'd be most-helpful.
As to the semi's, I don't have a dog in the fight, except they stylize the poem. If you like them, keep them!
Best of luck,
crow.