God is Dead

[ChristopherSea]

How about critiquing the poem and not the critiques RiverRot.

Doesn't that part somewhat count as a critique of the poem? Like an alternate interpretation of the poem's wording or something?

No it does not. If you read the forum rules you will see where it says that all posts in the critical forums should focus on the original post - the poem. From time to time a discussion may arise about specific techniques but these should take place in the discussion forums so as not to distract from the poem.

/ mod

It is OK to give alternative advice on a poem. We are not all of one voice here. However, to quote another's recommendation and critique their advice is rather rude and arrogant. In fact, we call it 'bt-rude-o-ing someone', named after it's founder.