04-28-2014, 02:14 PM
hi thoughtjotter,
i agree its a bit off there but adding me would make the line a syllable too long in comparison to the other stanza's last lines - hopefully its not so abstract that readers wont get it. thanks for reading and commenting
i agree its a bit off there but adding me would make the line a syllable too long in comparison to the other stanza's last lines - hopefully its not so abstract that readers wont get it. thanks for reading and commenting

