My Shadow -edited
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hi thoughtjotter,

i agree its a bit off there but adding me would make the line a syllable too long in comparison to the other stanza's last lines - hopefully its not so abstract that readers wont get it. thanks for reading and commenting
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My Shadow -edited - by Mopkins - 04-28-2014, 01:52 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Thoughtjotter - 04-28-2014, 02:09 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Mopkins - 04-28-2014, 02:14 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Erthona - 04-28-2014, 02:17 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Mopkins - 04-28-2014, 02:28 PM
RE: My Shadow - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Mopkins - 04-28-2014, 09:31 PM
RE: My Shadow - by milo - 04-28-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: My Shadow - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: My Shadow - by Mopkins - 04-28-2014, 10:14 PM



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